The Girl With the Purple Dress

Love is the Breath of Life

I thought I could write

but my pen had run out of ink

I thought I could see

but realised I was blind

I thought I coud hear soft sweet music

but only silence was around

I thought I knew love and all it's ways

but then I saw you

Heard you sing

and thats when I knew, I knew nothing at all

For no words ever spoken

could explain you

or describe you

No song ever sung

could ever tell the beauty of you

And no other eye

could see

what I behold each time  I gaze upon you

Reviews

[Alicia™]

This makes me think of an old story… I don't mean a story I've read a while ago, but an aged one, if that makes sense. It's beautiful… I can almost see her, and I can certainly imagine someone sitting at a table with the lights down low writing this with a feather pen.

[Writer *78*]

Ah the toils of being in love and sensing that it is true. I know this far too well. Impressive work.

[?]

That was so beautiful!! Wonderful soft flow...Beautiful imagery...Beautiful words...Excellente'

[Arabdha]

Beautiful !

[realmwriter]

Damn, yeah I've felt and feel that way about a woman. Well captured for sure. True Love, hard to find though it is, is out there...

[SINDE]

Awesome write my friend. I was able to form an almost complete and perfect image of her beauty .Plus you managed to keep it simple all through and this kept the poem alive and full of meaning .Though written in free verse there was a perfect flow through the whole piece:)

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

This was a beautiful story of love! The imagery was stunning!

[deeps]

I like your write, i found it lovely and sincere

[Sukriti Suki]

I like this....but isn't this Kim Kardashian? I have a different perspective there...I like the emotion in this piece. Nice.

[Kiri Nells]

Sweet and wonderfully done. Great work!

[Jeremy Baker]

Very sweet message and style.