It's been a long time coming

An old poem revamped

When in the translation of emotions all feeling is lost When the wolf howls out of distress and flowers no longer bloom Where will you be? When days are long and the nights longer still and the moon no longer shines, so darkness envelopes you like a shroud Where will you be? And you hear the plaintive wail of a mothers cry for a lost or abandoned child and all the rivers have run into dried out seas Where will you be? Then at long times lasting, you turn your eyes to me to that vacant spot where you thought i would be then i wonder where will you be? When transgressions wear you down, and all hope has fled and mortality stares at you from that empty place Where do you think i will be?

Reviews

[Inkcognito]

Wonderful write - I ask these same questions over and over again!
"When in the translation of emotions all feeling is lost" A trend that seems to happening all too often. We misunderstand the intentions of the other, which leads to a breakdown in comprehension, communication and the subsequent drift between people, signalling the inevitable, slow but sure demise of a once perfectly great relationship. Tragic really...

[Hush Hush]

'Then at long times lasting, you turn your eyes to me
to that vacant spot where you thought i would be
then i wonder where will you be? '
~~~~~Simply amazing :)

[Lindsey]

Very good very enjoyable to read and something I find very intriguing.

[xjust-for-me.x]

great write

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Very well written, something for the readers to ponder!

[Terra]

I feel I shall be floating somewhere in space with no one there to comfort me.For real.

[Terra]

nice.:)

[HopelesslyDevoted]

very powerful words of wisdom :)

[cfix]

Wow, this is amazing, full of emotion.
a thought provoking write, Very well done!

[typingaway]

This is truly amazing!
Shame I cannot answer it :P
I love the way you have written this, amazing!*(:

[Brianna Brie]

This is a great write! One that would surely stand the test of time.