Transendental Meditation or Waterfalls Delight

Boredom often comes unbidden

How shall i paint thee? In colours of bright lightening Spirals of golden mist forever tightening, And how shall i love thee? In shades of peppermint pink, When the shapes that surround me are losing their ink, May i inspire thee? To take out your brush, and draw me a rainbow dipped in jasmine's bright fire, Drown me with your fragrance and lucid desire. Under waterfalls labouring shower I bid thee goodnight In this your finest hour

Author's Note

Dont ask, I dont have the answers

Reviews

[MuSe Ampoule]

Look at you...writing such a piece! Amazing. I read this through twice and got two different perspectives/feelings/moods. Brilliant. I read it the first time without the notes and thought 'Wow, what a beautifully sensual piece!' then the second time I read it with the notes and felt it dripping with sarcasm...Oh bordom..."how shall I paint thee" with bright colors and lovely stimulation. Nope, you defeat me.

Fantastic piece!

[Wondering Mind]

Very romantic with lovely imagery..wonderful cascading flow

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. wow ... your words are just incredibly poetic ... (lines 3, 6, 9 - in particular) ... they just flow and flow and flow ... and oh so beautifully ... if boredom can lead to such inspired and inspiring writing ... may you be bored more often ... :P ... and the picture is as breathtakingly beautiful as this poem ...

[Crowley]

Great feel to this, the questions could be for so many things that it takes the reader sown his/her own road, reliving experinces, fleshing out situations.....great stuff my friend...loved it.

[InkSlinger]

I will not ask.. but, a sweet little piece, full of romance, and tenderness..