Transendental Meditation or Waterfalls Delight

Boredom often comes unbidden

How shall i paint thee? In colours of bright lightening Spirals of golden mist forever tightening, And how shall i love thee? In shades of peppermint pink, When the shapes that surround me are losing their ink, May i inspire thee? To take out your brush, and draw me a rainbow dipped in jasmine's bright fire, Drown me with your fragrance and lucid desire. Under waterfalls labouring shower I bid thee goodnight In this your finest hour

Author's Note

Dont ask, I dont have the answers

Reviews

[MuSe Ampoule]

Look at you...writing such a piece! Amazing. I read this through twice and got two different perspectives/feelings/moods. Brilliant. I read it the first time without the notes and thought 'Wow, what a beautifully sensual piece!' then the second time I read it with the notes and felt it dripping with sarcasm...Oh bordom..."how shall I paint thee" with bright colors and lovely stimulation. Nope, you defeat me.

Fantastic piece!

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Golden beauty of a poet writing an outstandinging work of art!

[Doug Ordunio]

Like this seeming tribute to EB Browning. Very nice touches

[Brett Campaigne]

The juxtaposition of colours, emotion and their objects really evokes rich and original experience with this... the iridescing sheen off a mermaid's scaled hips.

[Graceful]

awww it's sooooooooooooooooo sweat! love it!

[Alicante lullaby]

lovely imagery...peppermint pink..and the archaic style...beautiful...

[Im His Daughter]

OH MY GOD I LOVE THIS ONE!

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if this is boredom..I am bored stiff..delightful..

[Inkcognito]

My mind started racing at : "Spirals of golden mist forever tightening"...
(I really should meditate more often too!)
I love the colorful imagery and fragrant romance that you weave through your thoughts so effortlessly ...phew..sounds like a 'finest hour' to me, for sure! ...
I like it - a lot!

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

this is pure luxurious rapture of beautifully blended words~