Transendental Meditation or Waterfalls Delight

Transendental Meditation or Waterfalls Delight

A Poem by Linear
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Boredom often comes unbidden

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How shall i paint thee? In colours of bright lightening Spirals of golden mist forever tightening, And how shall i love thee? In shades of peppermint pink, When the shapes that surround me are losing their ink, May i inspire thee? To take out your brush, and draw me a rainbow dipped in jasmine's bright fire, Drown me with your fragrance and lucid desire. Under waterfalls labouring shower I bid thee goodnight In this your finest hour

© 2011 Linear


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Linear
Dont ask, I dont have the answers

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Look at you...writing such a piece! Amazing. I read this through twice and got two different perspectives/feelings/moods. Brilliant. I read it the first time without the notes and thought 'Wow, what a beautifully sensual piece!' then the second time I read it with the notes and felt it dripping with sarcasm...Oh bordom..."how shall I paint thee" with bright colors and lovely stimulation. Nope, you defeat me.

Fantastic piece!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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This was truly amazing. I read it a couple of times and I really liked it. It doesn't matter that you don't have answers the only thing that matters is that you came out with such a beautiful piece.
&heart;s Ta'Shandra

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

how shall i paint thee? tis such a well worded masterpiece.
nice. i imagine this being read by someone with a deep/ bedroom voice...
because it's alluring and the metaphors were awesome!

why don't you have the answers? :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice write. Very dreamy.

Posted 13 Years Ago


The descriptions are amazing and there is a hint of longing and a sense of desire in this poem.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You paint such brilliant glimpses of beauty and humanity in your words.. golden shimmers of light and softer peppermints.. colours that bring about tender emotions... May you paint your world with such words, friend poet.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

love the imagertary

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like the poem. It someone could figure out the emotion of love. Would be best selling book ever. I learn after 20 years of marriage. Better to be positive and say nothing negative. I like your description and ending. A wise person knows love is rare and need the tender touches of calm and peace like the words in your poem. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


very nice wordplay.


Posted 13 Years Ago


this is beautiful!!! god! I LOVE THIS!
what a picture you paint! so peaceful!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Linear

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