Transendental Meditation or Waterfalls Delight

Boredom often comes unbidden

How shall i paint thee? In colours of bright lightening Spirals of golden mist forever tightening, And how shall i love thee? In shades of peppermint pink, When the shapes that surround me are losing their ink, May i inspire thee? To take out your brush, and draw me a rainbow dipped in jasmine's bright fire, Drown me with your fragrance and lucid desire. Under waterfalls labouring shower I bid thee goodnight In this your finest hour

Author's Note

Dont ask, I dont have the answers

Reviews

[MuSe Ampoule]

Look at you...writing such a piece! Amazing. I read this through twice and got two different perspectives/feelings/moods. Brilliant. I read it the first time without the notes and thought 'Wow, what a beautifully sensual piece!' then the second time I read it with the notes and felt it dripping with sarcasm...Oh bordom..."how shall I paint thee" with bright colors and lovely stimulation. Nope, you defeat me.

Fantastic piece!

[linear]

Been a while

[Linear]

2,400 views :O)

[SINDE]

I've never seen this wonderful piece but it the best one yet. I love the vivid descriptions and the wonderful diction.

[Linear]

2,300 views todate :O)

[Moflo]

This is fantastic! The descriptions are absolutely incredible and the set up is very very clever. Love the picture as well. Great work.

[Linear]

Wooo hooo 2000 views

[Linear]

1951 views can u guess why ;0)

[Marie Harrison]

It's gorgeous. I can see why it's had so many views.
It's an ambrosia of words.

[Linear]

This is my most viewed poem, now standing at 1887 views

[dora]

A rainbow dipped in jasmine's bright fire? Okay you just said I shouldn't ask because you don't have the answers, this is another great poem.
Keep them coming.