Dreams and Schemes

A mind wander

In dreams falling cascades
I wonder
Even ponder
About your voice
Hidden inside this water

Gentle meanings lost
In streams rivulets
Caresses with each finger
Leaves nothing but surrender
Will you i wonder submit to my eternal thunder?

Reviews

[Adam :P]

I love the imagery its brilliant!

[Poetic Beauty]

This poem has beautiful imagery and life many times has no answers only questions.

[....]

lovely write & brillant!

[Faith]

A very interesting write. Makes you wonder if you will ever hear that voice.

[Im His Daughter]

Sweet Niblets! Eep this is awesome!

[Alicante lullaby]

flawless,flowy...

[thundergod]

a beautiful poem by a beautiful mind

[A. L. Z.]

Interesting...

[Sunny Skye]

I love it!! is really good. I like the flow to it and how you ended it with a rhymy question.

[Emily B]

I like your wandering