The Last Goodbye

The Last Goodbye

A Poem by Linear
"

A sad tale of despair, and unrequieted love It is just a fiction

"

It's been a while since last i stood here

looking out at the waves

feeling the cold, bite into my hands, feet and nose

looking out at the oceans deep.

 

Wondering about you

thinking only of you

do you in your lonely quiet times ever think of me?

I will never know

since you left the skies have been so grey

the wind constantly cold

my tears have turned to ice upon my cheeks

 

I often think of your beautiful face

the words you spoke, so full of grace

Oh the way you made me laugh

and yes of our love making

your scent a fragrance so divine

the heady aroma of your breath upon my flesh

That special way you moaned and called out my name

at that almost celestial moment of sheer bliss

 

All gone now

Just this eternal bitter cold

as the sea finally envelopes me

takes me away from this pain you left inside

Goodbye my only true love

GOODBYE

 

© 2010 Linear


My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

And how hard it is to get rid of the lingering hurt we would have loved not to have encountered..
Heartfelt..

Posted 13 Years Ago


the classic feel is almost Arthurian in affect~ lyrical and lovely presentation of the longing heart through classic form~

Posted 13 Years Ago


Sad! Goodbyes always leave a hole in our being.

Posted 13 Years Ago



2
next Next Page
last Last Page
Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

358 Views
13 Reviews
Rating
Added on November 27, 2010
Last Updated on November 27, 2010

Author

Linear
Linear

United Kingdom



About
Dont worry if the sparrow chirps today, Tomorrow the Nightingale shall sing Judge me if you will, not on the words of another who may have their own agenda, but as YOU find me, as YOU .. more..

Writing
Cliche! Cliche!

A Poem by Linear


clouds clouds

A Poem by Linear



Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..


Love Lies Love Lies

A Poem by Linear


Humanhate Humanhate

A Poem by Linear


Nocturne Nocturne

A Poem by OT


Night Calls Night Calls

A Poem by Linear