Gothic Vampire

A promt/ and a trial

In the land where all hopes and dreams

have faded like the early morning mist

 

When even daylight shrouds you

like the darkest night

here is where you will ever find my soul

 

Creeping through passageways

damp with the blood of the innocents

here is where the screams of the lost and lonely,

reverberate through hallowed halls

 

The stench of slowly decaying flesh

assaults my senses, I feel the ever present hunger

the thirst for that warm sweet nectar

that pulsates through your veins and arteries alike

 

Moving slowly creeping lowly

a shadows shifting shape

peering through the window pane

tap tapping lightly

waiting anticipating at your window sill

Reviews

[Poetic Beauty]

I love the pace you have set for this poem. The imagery is dark and spooky. I love all things vampire. Great write on one of my favorite paranormal creatures.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Spooky read! Well written, the imagery was perfect!

[cfix]

The imagery is wonderful.
So is the detail,
This is one wonderful write.
Enjoyed this.

[Marie Harrison]

Man, I"m not answering the tap at my window now. Totally creeped me out, this poem. Which is good. That's what vampire poems are supposed to do. Forcing one's skin to crawl after they've read it. Making them double check their door locks. Scary poem.

[Ladysue]

good title and piece...some good phrases and images...nicely done...

[Jūdan FyreHeart]

=) Great atmosphere with some awesome images

[xjust-for-me.x]

Excellent

[♍ Kirstin ♎]

Awesome write. I love the darkness of the imagery and the sinister/hostyle vibe from it. XD

[Alicante lullaby]

wonderful,engrossing imagery...i liked the dark aura about it...clean..

[Calypso]

Just title title drew me in and I was not disappointed