Gothic Vampire

A promt/ and a trial

In the land where all hopes and dreams

have faded like the early morning mist

 

When even daylight shrouds you

like the darkest night

here is where you will ever find my soul

 

Creeping through passageways

damp with the blood of the innocents

here is where the screams of the lost and lonely,

reverberate through hallowed halls

 

The stench of slowly decaying flesh

assaults my senses, I feel the ever present hunger

the thirst for that warm sweet nectar

that pulsates through your veins and arteries alike

 

Moving slowly creeping lowly

a shadows shifting shape

peering through the window pane

tap tapping lightly

waiting anticipating at your window sill

Reviews

[Judas Hammer]

LOL nice! get out of my window! Scary stuff. nice ending

[Lindsey]

A+

[SINDE]

Spooky and awesome. Another great piece my friend.

[Day Dreamer]

Wow....spooky, but very, very well written. Keep writing! :)

[Dewella~Vintella]

Very eerie and dark. I loved it. Your use of words and the flow was wonderful creating a vivid picture and haunting emotions.

Beautiful, keep up the good work ^^

Vinny~

[LA Lorena]

A most eerie tale, full of vivid imagery and detail

[deeps]

Such amazing Imagery and wonderful detail,
I enjoyed this.

[Tasha]

The imagery and detail is wonderful even if it is a little spooky. Great write.
♥ Ta'Shandra

Great imagery!
Quite spooky, but definetly detailed.

[Cynthia]

What a spooky and scary write! Its a very good darj poem, I am not going to answer the window after this, isnt that so scary to have someone tap on your window and it turn out to be something else than human?