Why Dont You See Like Me

A conflict between the sexes

Perhaps i should bleed my words upon the wallThen you might see, and even call

 

Maybe its you, though it may be me

Cant we wake up from this misery

 

You cast dark clouds at my feet

Are you hoping i'll retreat

 

Why dont you see

Yes see like me, then maybe we will both be free

 

Free to love like others do

Free to love each other too

 

 

Reviews

[Dani]

Both should take turns letting the other lead for a while. Walk in somebody else's steps before you make them walk in yours.
Good write.

[Aven]

Selene said it best... what do those drops of emerald reflect?

[Anna]

Sounds good!

[Hollow Man]

damn..hit straight to the heart.

kgs

[Crowley]

Man...I don't remember giving you permission to write about me...lol. This was dead on and full of the frustration that can sometimes come during communication with your loving other. Nice job...

[Joshua Smit]

nice, very emotive :D

[Wondering Mind]

beautiful write, Linear, absolutely beautiful

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. brilliant ... absolutely brilliant ... your voice reverberates ... and it is definitely meant to ... people have become immune to sensitivity ... on both sides of the fence ... this is precisely the somewhat assertive poetic plea needed to knock them out of their stupor ...

[MuSe Ampoule]

Very well written, good job!

[Drake Ryder]

This is really great. A strong, meaningful piece. The whole thing works really, really well.