Why Dont You See Like Me

A conflict between the sexes

Perhaps i should bleed my words upon the wallThen you might see, and even call

 

Maybe its you, though it may be me

Cant we wake up from this misery

 

You cast dark clouds at my feet

Are you hoping i'll retreat

 

Why dont you see

Yes see like me, then maybe we will both be free

 

Free to love like others do

Free to love each other too

 

 

Reviews

[Terra]

i love it!very rhymie.

[JanieB]

Nicely done.

[claudia1201]

wouldave been boring staring at the same view...quite a complicated piece

[Sports Girl]

This is really good

[Poetic Beauty]

The last two line are wonderful lines but my favorite line is "you cast dark clouds at my feet" I say keep trying. Love is the most wonderful emotion in the world and it creates all kinds of other emotions along with. Fasten you seat-belt and brace your head in anticipation for the bumps in the road. Great imagery in this poem on one of the most talked about subjects in the world.

[Frank F. Atanacio]

great share--straight to the point I like the way you handled this read

[Jūdan FyreHeart]

It's really sweet and to the point.

[.]

great sentiment..lovely idea..never going to work LOL

[Cynthia]

wonderful Poem, its sad, but at the same time, its so beautiful, and I love it!
I love the line ' free to like others do, Free to love each other too', its such a great ending!

[Ladysue]

A wonderful soft flowing piece...sad but beautifully written...