All You Can Be

In those narrow corridors of your mind
In the dark recesses of frozen time

Did you once think you would be mine?

On all fours you crawl before me,
do you think thats how it should be?

Stand up
Dont lean on me
Hold your head high

For you may see, you are far greater than me.

Author's Note

Could not format this or alter type!
I dont know why.

Reviews

[TM "Ree" Tate]

very nice!!

[iamkim]

Wonderful!

[.......]

such truthful words
I like this alot

[Amanda_Rose]

aww very cute. i enjoyed this poem very much

[Ruth]

One of my favourites from you actually love, you know why? Because it is concise yes, but it holds everything it could in the wording! xx

[Murtuza]

True words indeed.

[HopelesslyDevoted]

true... true

[Lowesy]

O...M....G!! i think i'm welling up :D ah it was good, liked it!

[No use.]

when people fail to acknowledge their own potential.. . can be quite frustrating! i hate to see talent go to waste!

[Terra]

wow.excellent.