Mistress Sea

The temporate waters beckon

entice as any woman can

 

To hold me

tenderly enfold me

in her saltiness

 

She arouses every sense

her fingers caress every open pore

 

Embracing me taking me deeper

and deeper

into her icy tomb

 

Soft seas silence

another body floats

drifting on noonday tide

 

Home at last

quiet now

just the lapping of her waves

Reviews

[Poetic Beauty]

The descriptions allowing me to picture the ocean at it finest and the metaphor is spectacular.

[Coyote Poetry]

I met the ocean in 1991 for the first time. I was lucky and the beach Surfers felt pity for me and allowed me to hang with them. (I always had whiskey and beer in my truck) I did the big storms of winter three times. Today I would put my body suit on and do it again if I could. The Pacific ocean is the best place to be near. The poem is amazing. The ocean is dangerous for the people who do not respect her. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Marie Harrison]

Very soothing and sensual poem. Bravo!

[Goodbye]

Whoa...just, whoa! What incredible, intoxicating words that make me want to take a swim.

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

the ultimate seduction of the human soul~

[Wondering Mind]

not because I love open water diving, but this is perfect

[PadfootBlack]

I LOVE the personification! This is lovely, really! Sensual, and deliciously read. Well done.

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. the sea is incredibly fascinating ... and so are these words ... there's a sense of submission here that i find totally enchanting ...

[Aven]

fatal seduction... with a wet kiss she seals your fate, drowning you in the abyss, your love locked away... great write !

[Ed Hart]

yes, home...our ancient mother, that