Mistress Sea

The temporate waters beckon

entice as any woman can

 

To hold me

tenderly enfold me

in her saltiness

 

She arouses every sense

her fingers caress every open pore

 

Embracing me taking me deeper

and deeper

into her icy tomb

 

Soft seas silence

another body floats

drifting on noonday tide

 

Home at last

quiet now

just the lapping of her waves

Reviews

[iamkim]

a very good write! i just don't love it because you have written it so good, but because i feel great reading a poem about women, especially from a man's perspective :) thumbs up!

[Ladysue]

I love poems about the sea. your imagery spot on and vivid...well done...

[An owl on the moon]

Your intimate imagery reminded me how much I miss the sea... Her powerful waves are a mystical music. Beautifully confessed.

[Angela Mulley]

Excellent!

[xjust-for-me.x]

a excellant poem...

[sarah]

A beautiful poem!

Such a beautiful poem, very visual. Felt like I was standing there.
The metaphors, very clever Linear! Very pretty!

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the sensual metaphors are a delight to my senses ...

[HopelesslyDevoted]

i too love the imagery of this. it really does pull you in and the stanza later in the poem totally surprised me with icy tomb and the bodies. perfect approach to your mind I must say! very impressive!

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Lve the beach, and this was awesome! The imagery was so excellent I could visualize the ocean!