Mistress Sea

The temporate waters beckon

entice as any woman can

 

To hold me

tenderly enfold me

in her saltiness

 

She arouses every sense

her fingers caress every open pore

 

Embracing me taking me deeper

and deeper

into her icy tomb

 

Soft seas silence

another body floats

drifting on noonday tide

 

Home at last

quiet now

just the lapping of her waves

Reviews

[Ruth]

This is beautifully expressed...a beautiful metaphor, the ending is gorgeous, enjoyed this one a lot xoxo

[?]

Your intimate imagery in this piece makes me want to go to the sea even more.
(I've never been)
Beautiful piece

[lifesmith]

This poem has a relaxing feel to it but I somehow can't help the thought that perhaps that ending is not a as happy as it looks

[SINDE]

The images your words create are vivid and this makes this piece alive. AWESOME!

[Dewella~Vintella]

What a wonderful write. Beautiful and graceful. ^^

Dew~

[Day Dreamer]

I loved this. Very emotionally, loving, and well written. Keep writing! :)

[Kiri Nells]

This is really great! Thank you for sharing this. :)

[deeps]

This is wonderful, I really enjoyed this write.

[Tasha]

A very good write, I liked the imagery.
♥ Ta'Shandra