Twirling Shadows

old poem

Twirling shadows of mist and time
colours abound inside my mind

Yellow, green and indigo blue
it seems im always thinking of you.

Reviews

[luciddreamer]

What a beautiful thing to do...thinking and writing to a love in brilliant colors...most of us humans want brilliant color on tv...yet only see in black and white the rest of the time....beautful write...thanks for sharing
Peace
Robin

[TBird J.]

These four lines speak so loudly! Amazing job!

[Robin]

my mindscape is a deluge of color in thought , this poem captures that feeling

[J.M]

Short but beautiful written. I love the way the colours are linked to the longing and emotion.

[Elliot]

Very catchy. I feel this could easily be made into a song

[Toon]

I like the imagery. "twirling shadows of mist and time" -awesome. that and I like the brevity... really solid work.

[.]

. that's an awesome thing to do ... :) ...

[Wondering Mind]

Oldie but goldie...You think in colours, and it's lovely

[Sweet_pale_cacophony]

It is wonderful how all colors and all thoughts come to have the same focal point at times..perhaps that is how it was supposed to be.
I feel this was beautifully expressed.

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Wow this is wonderful, I really enjoyed the beauty of this.