Twirling Shadows

old poem

Twirling shadows of mist and time
colours abound inside my mind

Yellow, green and indigo blue
it seems im always thinking of you.

Reviews

[JanieB]

Short and sweet.

[Coyote Poetry]

A very beautiful and positive poem. I like the flow and feel of the words. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Alicia™]

This has beautiful imagery in such a short poem, and I don't think you could have described it better. Wonderful!

[shelbylugal]

This poem was short, sweet, to the point and so true. Whenever someone thinks of someone they love, they feel like this.

[xjust-for-me.x]

isnt that the way it goes when we are thinking of someone special. i lkie this.

[Jūdan FyreHeart]

XD I like this one, the way the images and emotions wrap around each other. It's simple but with great sentiment.

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short but sweet..how I like them :)

[Cynthia]

what a great short poem with such a great flow!
the rhyming is nicely done,
and its so beautiful!

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Love it, such few little words can have such a beautiful romantic feel!