We Are Ghosts

Something light

Is anything really what we first thought?
We are but ghosts in transition
aimlessly searching for something
to hold onto.

like ships without rudders
no port in sight
we reach out for love
yet have no right

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

With age. I see how un-important one life is. We are here for a short time. In death will fade away to a distance memory. I learn we best appreciate opportunity and try to enjoy our joys and sadness. I like the logic of this poem. Every line strong and with purpose. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Poe Redd]

How true, how gorgeous. And I especially love the last two lines. They take me mind and inspire me. :)

[SINDE]

Heavy piece. Yet another great write. Your words are timeless and describe a lot more than is comprehendable by a normal mind. Awesome piece.

'...like ships without rudders
no port in sight
we reach out for love
yet have no right...'

[lifesmith]

life is too short and too long to spend worrying

[V]

short but thoughtful piece.

[xjust-for-me.x]

A short but to the point poem....the words are stronge and show the meaning in a way life is like.

[Ruth]

Poignant and beautifully voiced love! We are becoming mere spectres......in a ghost world! Love this, always a surprise within your work for me to admire xx

[Emily B]

something's been haunting my dreams . . . it isn't love

and some days I wonder what it could be

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

this feels of sad melodies strung across the searching sky~

[Day Dreamer]

Very eye opening to many people...not including myself. Lovely poem, my friend. Keep writing! :)

[Black]

I agree to this,
the most we grave is love,
not food, but love and support
though, i often think, what give us the right to want that?