Ageless Love

Was it so long ago that i found you?

Laughter ringing like bells, soft curls falling over shoulders

was our love a mirage, a phantom
a spectre sent to haunt
for the rest of my days

Was it so long ago that i dreamed you?
has it been so long

Wake me up, with your lips upon mine
breathe breath into this dead heart,
wake me up to your smile

embrace me, take these bones and make me live once more.

Has it truely been so very long

Reviews

[Undying Glory]

this sure was great work here, i really like this one. this felt really deep and beautiful, very sweet as well. nice work here

[Cynthia]

What a relateble and touching peice of write! I love it!

[Gone]

It's like you are speaking to your partner of long standing searching for the return of that firstlove feeling.

Wake me up, with your lips upon mine
breathe breath into this dead heart,
wake me up to your smile
embrace me, take these bones and make me live once more.
Has it truely been so very long

[Sunny Skye]

Very good i really like it. Very touching. Good job.

-Skyeblanco-

[Angela Mulley]

Love it! Well written!

[luciddreamer]

I so understand this write....great work :)

Peace
Robin

[InkSlinger]

touching, a soul searching question.. may she warm the cold with her kiss, and breath yet a breath of life into the heart that ceases to beat.

[MuSe Ampoule]

Such an imploring and solemn tale of love's loss lingering far too long. As always, just great work Linear! You ne'er disappoint!

"Wake me up, with your lips upon mine
breathe breath into this dead heart,
wake me up to your smile"

[Marie Harrison]

was our love a mirage, a phantom
a spectre sent to haunt
for the rest of my days

my favorite line. Loved this poem! Very sweet.

[Alicante lullaby]

this song has a dream-wake feel to it and alot of sadness..i love it...wonderful..