Giveing up all hope

Giveing up all hope

A by lindsey

Dark red blood driping off the knife. Blood the color of the walls around her. trying not to make a sound scared to show the pain. Tears dripping down her face.  just wanting to let go of all the pain inside. dont know what to do anymore just ready to let go.

© 2008 lindsey


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Overall a good read, keep up the good work and feel free to send me a request when ever..
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Posted 16 Years Ago


So tragicly red.. Reminds me of a friends daughter once who splashed red food coloring all over the bathroom walls. full of fear and wanting attention but at the same time wanting to be left alone.
Thats what this reminded me of
Good poem!

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on February 23, 2008

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lindsey
lindsey

pville, OH



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Hey...My name is Lindsey. I�m 14 ill be 15 in June. im from pville cant wait to get out of here. i love talkin to people.but i can be shy at times. i cant spell 4 s**t sorry. im learning h.. more..


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