True.

This is about one of my friends. She hasnt been the same lately. and i dont feel like i can trust her.

True

 

You can say what you want

I'll believe it when i see it

Or even when you actually mean it

To you friendship is no big deal

What you say, isn't what you really feel

We have to Solve these issues now

Or one day we'll look back and wonder how

We could have thrown this all away

 

But how do I know what you say is True

Or What you tell me is what you do

When we make plans

They dissapear

I say it's alright

Cause if it's not We fight

If we put forth the effort

We'll get back what we had

As long as i know

Your not putting on a show

And that what you say

Is true

 

You dont think about me

When we go out.

And i'm just Unlucky number Three.

If I tell you something

It gets out the next day

Working Together is the only way

For things to be the same.

 

But How do I know what you say is true

Or what you tell me is what you do

When we make plans

They Disappear

I say it Alright'

Cause if its not we fight

If we out forth the effort

We'll get back what we had

As long as I know.

Your not putting on a show

And that what you say

Is true.

 

I miss the fun times

Those late night chats

Taking random pictures

Those were the times that

Meant the most

Because they were real

To most kids these times seem surreal

I know things will be fine

We'll be back on cloud nine

If..

 

I know in my heart

What you say is True

We deserve another chance

Maybe others will get a clue

That everything you say

Should come from your heart

And Always be True.

 

 

Author's Note

There is probably capitalization or punctuation problems. Anything is Appreciated!

Reviews

[Stephen Ownby]

I actually like some of the words that are capitalized, it shows emphasis. Look out for cliche expressions, though. If you hear people use a phrase all the time in conversation, don't put it in a poem.

[youngwriter222]

Love the lyrics. It is really hard to have a friend that you used to be really close to but now you can't trust them. My friends are like that, I don't even call my friends friends anymore.


"I miss the fun times
Those late night chats
Taking random pictures
Those were the times that
Meant the most
Because they were real
To most kids these times seem surreal
I know things will be fine
We'll be back on cloud nine
If.."

I like how the the repeating stanza goes because it tells readers that you were close to this friends but those times are taken away and you miss them.

Great job