Already Gone.

Already Gone.

A Poem by Lindsey:)
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Basically describes he lied..i left.. for my own sake.

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Already Gone

 

You thought you had me

But you don't

I caught you

It's over

Don't say that you won't

The damage is done

Looks like you've won

It's too late

I'm already gone.

 

Out the door

On my way

I just have one thing left to say

You have to give love

To receive it

Even if you don't believe it

I'm already gone

 

It's no surprise

I believed your lies

And forgave you a million times

But this time it's different

I caught you right in it

Your out of chances

I'm already gone.

 

Out the door

On my way

I just have one thing left to say

You have to give love

To receive it

Even if you don't believe it

I'm already gone

 

I ask myself

Was this right?

Was it woth giving up all of "those nights?"

Without a doubt

I know it was

Please don't miss me

Because

I'm already gone

 

Out the door

On my way

I just have one thing left to say

You have to give love

To receive it

Even if you don't believe it

I was right all along

I'm already gone.

© 2008 Lindsey:)


Author's Note

Lindsey:)
anything is appreciated!

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hmm girl just one thing, while reading it the flow was just a tee-tiny bumpy, but other than that...
AWESOME, AWESOME, AWESOME!!!

Posted 16 Years Ago


I love the threatening feel to this poem. However, there is a sense that the author is hopeful that she will survive and be stronger in the end. Great job.

Just run a quick spell check through ;)
(I'm a terrible speller too, I need people to point out my mistakes as well :)

Take care!

Jason


Posted 16 Years Ago


hehhh... this was good!!! you really got the message through this time!

~may

Posted 16 Years Ago



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My name is Lindsey. as you can see. im 15! im a freshman in HS. i love everything about life! music is my ABSOLUTE FAVORITE. I love to sing. and dance even though i dont know how. haha. my fami.. more..

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A Poem by Lindsey:)



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