You.

Thisone is about my MOM. i feel like our relationship is very special. i know alot ofmy friends are as close with their moms as i am. but anyways. she is the one i look up to in life.

You:)

 

Where to start?

What to say?

Your outlook on life just blows me away.

From the start.

You were there.

A shoulder to cry on.

Someone who cared.

As life goes on i'll try my best.

Hey I wanna be like you.

 

Just like you.

And nothing less.

You know the right thing to say.

And our talks are the best.

Making me smile.

Counting me in.

Yeah I wanna be like you.

 

Your a kid at heart.

Were so much alike.

Infact it's so much, that we never fight.

There's a time to be serious.

And a time to play.

You understand that all the way.

Hey I wanna be like you.

 

Just like you.

And nothing less.

You know the right thing to say.

And our talks are the best.

Making me smile.

Counting me in.

Yeah I wanna be like you.

 

You pick me up.

When i'm down.

My face turns to a smile.

From a Frown.

You understand my feelings most.

There's not much more to say except..

Hey I wanna be like you.

 

Just like you.

And nothing less.

You know the right thingto say.

And our talks are the best.

Hope one day my friends can plainly see.

I am who i want to be.

And that is just like you.

Author's Note

sameas every other one. anything is appreciated.

Reviews

[Marvin Lewis Jr.]

I love this!
My favorite part is how you repeated the line "Hey I wanna be just like you and nothing less" Its sounds like you and your mom have a very special relationship.
I also like the part that said "We're so much alike, in fact it's so much that we never fight" that's an amazing thing to be able to say.
I like all of your writing and I look forward to reading more!
This poem is beautiful!

[Magnolia]

Thanks for the review.

And well done. I love this is. The words are put together so greatly.

[Russianbeauty]

i think everybody needs a person like this in their life. you are very blessed, and it is wonderful that you don't take that for granite.

good write.

[MorganLyn]

oolalala.. girl it is AWESOME! I love it, love it, love it!! I bet she would too!

great work my friend :)

[Samuel Dickens]

It warms my heart to see such love expressed. Your mother must be very proud of you. Thanks, Sam