Just a teenager.

Just a teenager.

A Poem by Lindsey:)
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This one describes life as a teenager. enjoy it while you can cause one day you will have to gow up and these days will be gone.

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Just a teenager

 

Got lots of late night phonecalls.

Movie nights and Popcorn.

Still seems like I was just born.

Sleeping till noon.

Not growing up anytime soon.

Yeah I'm a teenager.

 

I'm just a teenager.

let me live.

leave me be.

Shopping, texting, and MTV.

Dreading homework.

Everyday with my friends.

Cant you see.

I'm just a teenager.

 

It comes with broken hearts,

Fashion trends,

Road trips,

and new boyfriends.

celebrity crushes.

New thoughts on things.

Yeah I'm a teenager.

 

Im just a teenager.

let me live.

leave me be.

Shopping, texting, and MTV.

Dreading homework.

Everyday with my friends.

Cant you see.

I'm just a teenager.

 

You learn alot.

These days are fun.

Concerts, and staying out in the sun.

But I know there will be a day.

This will stop.

and I will say.

Goodbye teenage days.

 

But hey Im just a teenager.

Let me live.

Leave me be.

Shopping, Texting, and MTV.

Dreading homework.

Everyday with my friends.

Gonna enjoy it while I can.

Cause one day I know

I wont be

Just a teenager.

© 2008 Lindsey:)


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Lindsey:)
This is my favorite. anything is appreciated!

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"Im just a teenager.

let me live.

leave me be.

Shopping, texting, and MTV."---- hahah great line! very catchy! :)

I love the last line. It shows how one day we will have to grow up and leave all of our foolishness and youth behind... but thanks to people like you and me ;P... we can be a kooky as we want and get away with it!!

awesome work my friend!


Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Oh, we will never forget what it was like to be a teenager! Never stop living like one..just an older, wiser one that makes better decisions. Great work!

Posted 16 Years Ago


i like how this say that your young ages are short, so you should make them count... just try not to repeat stuff so often...but it was great!! it really describes teenagers!ha-like me...

~may

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"Im just a teenager.

let me live.

leave me be.

Shopping, texting, and MTV."---- hahah great line! very catchy! :)

I love the last line. It shows how one day we will have to grow up and leave all of our foolishness and youth behind... but thanks to people like you and me ;P... we can be a kooky as we want and get away with it!!

awesome work my friend!


Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Capitalize your "i" and it will make a big difference in your poem. If you substitute "teenager" with other words (synonyms) it won't be monotonous. You will be surprises how better it will read-even if you take out the repetitive lines and tighten up the piece-it will flow better.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is really good and it describes a teenager perfectly.

Great write!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Lindsey:)

Vinton., LA



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My name is Lindsey. as you can see. im 15! im a freshman in HS. i love everything about life! music is my ABSOLUTE FAVORITE. I love to sing. and dance even though i dont know how. haha. my fami.. more..

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