Life Is Beautiful

Describes my philosophy in life basically. when things get hard it will be okay. just say life is beautiful.

Life is Beautiful

 

You never know what to say.

Feels like if you do, no one listens anyway.

People ask how you make it through.

Yeah it's tough.

But just say..

 

Hey life is beautiful.

There's no time for worry

No time for fear.

Ya gotta realize that the end could be near.

It's all okay.

Hold your head high and say,

Life is beautiful.

 

You just wanna give up.

Things seem so far away.

Dreams seem too big to chase.

Burdens are too big to carry.

Shake them off.

Its okay to stand up and say..

 

Hey life is beautiful.

Theres no time for worry.

No time for fear.

Ya gotta realize that the end could be near.

It's all okay

Hold your head high and say.

Life is beautiful.

 

Feels like a rollercoaster.

Up and Down

Round and Round.

Yeah life gets hard

Ive been here before

But when it all comes down to the core.

 

Hey life is beautiful.

Theres no time for worry.

No time for fear.

Ya gotta realize that the end could be near.

Everything is okay.

Now you can stand up and say.

Life is beautiful.

Author's Note

Just tell me what you think. truthfully. just no rudeness. anything is greatly appreciated.

Reviews

[Marvin Lewis Jr.]

I've come to admire the mature innocence wherewith you write, and it is truly a rarity for someone your age to not only write poetry... But write beautiful poetry!
As long as I can see you have a lifetime reader...
Keep up the excellent work.
-Marv

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Very inspiring and well written. Life is beautiful, if we only see its simple beauty. Well done.

[Clockwork]

This piece reminds me of a song by Sixx Am, I don't know if you have ever heard of them but they are pretty good I think. I liked the way you formed this piece. You speak on a higher level than most your age, well done.

[MarchAprilMayJuneJuly]

i like your perspective! it seems logical and uplifting.. nice job!!! this piece had a good flow and was interesting to read...hey,have you heard that song "life is beautiful"???

~may

welcome to the cafe and keep writing from the heart!

[Hannah!]

Life IS beautiful, in general, but there are a whole lot of things about it that aren't. This is a cute piece; reminds me a lot of stuff I used to write at the beginning of high school, actually. I agree with the previous reviewer, too--it does read like song lyrics; it'd be interesting to hear this set to music.

[Janyce Helen Van Es]

Use apostrophes in your contractions (') it's (it is)

Another poem that appears like song lyrics. When I was 14 I lived for songs on the radio-maybe that is what inspires you to write this way. You do a great job-maybe you need to put music to some of your work.

[youngwriter222]

Life is beautiful and even though we have obsticles and things in our way we need to get around them and live our life to the fullest because this could be our last day.

Great Write!