Its not worth it

The crying,
The pain,
The suffering.

All you want is peace,
If only for just a moment.

The needle on your nightstand,
The voice in your head saying:
do it, do it.

The brief moment of unbearable pain
before it all goes away,
Its not worth it.

To see the cut,
To feel the burn,
To see the blood,
To feel relief,

Its not worth it..

Reviews

[sushi]

A vivid write. The message is being conveyed in a very good manner. The words are simple yet are successful in bringing out the deep meaning behind the write. Suicide is not a solution. It's worth nothing.

Nice try.
Well portrayed!!!

[Liz]

Ooo i like this! I loved the mental picture I got. Sometimes self-harm seems like the only escape, and unfortunately at the time we don't realize how much it's really not worth it.
I'm curious to see more of your writing(:

[typingaway]

This is brilliant!

To show all the emotion, to show how some people depend on self inflicted pain, And them to know it isn't worth it. I love how you've wrote it you've made it as is you're observing it...

Well done(: