Define me not

Define me not in my melancholy

Please tag me not in my fake smiles

Do not name me based on my attitudes

Define me simply as a part of this universe

I can simply melt in to songs of breeze

No hindrances to be part of the rain

Can be easily attached to the bright rainbows

Define me as inevitable part of this universe

Do not isolate me based on materialistic price tags

Never look at the success and failures surrounding me

Do separate me from all the categorizations

Can I be simply a part of this universe

Reviews

[paul sal.....]

Yes!!!...........................................................................................

[Linda alexander]

Thanks a lot for the visit and the review

[Miss Sharon]

Very nicely written with beautiful similie and metaphor. I like! ~Sharon

[Linda alexander]

Thanks a lot for the visit and review

[emmajoy]

'I can simply melt in to songs of breeze.. '

How wise you are, how fine your verse... i'll now read more. :)

[Linda alexander]

Thanks a lot for the visit and very encouraging positive review, this site and writers helped me to grow in writing, take care

[emmajoy]

We all need to share at times...and in doing that, learn along the way. You take care too. :)

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. All true. And excellent message....:))))

[Linda alexander]

Thanks a lot for the wow! and the word excellent, man from mars and few other writers welcomed me when I was in pre kindergarten in writing, still I did not understand your poem imperium

[Sami Khalil]

Lol. You are most welcome. ...:))))))

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

The reason we should never judge others is we don't truly know their situation, just as they don't know ours. That is why we need to respect everyone's choices and worry bout our own.

[Linda alexander]

So true but we do the opposite most often, thanks a lot for the visit and review, take care

[jacob erin-cilberto]

we are all part of one universe...we are all different in some way, but we all matter...and we all have our fears, joys, sorrows...no one thing defines anyone.
wow, on this poem..i really feel it...

j.

[Linda alexander]

Thanks a lot for the review and visit, really feel like I grew in writing as I am in this writing community, take care