Dreams waiting

Wings are strong wind is in favor

Can I take off and disappear

Yes dreams are waiting

Can you hear their calling for me

The branded and jeweled ones

Light and fluffy as white clouds

I am getting lighter and lighter

Just waiting to be lifted up

Reviews

[Stephen]

Umm .. something deep!! Isn`t it?? Yeah, the depth of the words are great, this piece could be interpret with many perspectives ..but the first perspective`s "love" ..yeah .. because if there`s no love, there`re no emotions and if there`s no emotions, there`re no dreams ... isn`t it?? Very thoughtful piece ~~ Great job!!

[Linda alexander]

Thanks a lot for the review, I like this one too, take care

[Stephen]

My pleasure. You too take care.

[Audrey Kanyera]

I love this poem, you can feel the winds of change as you reach out for your dreams!!!

[Daydreamer]

You nailed it 😂😍💘
Struck me right through ❤

[Linda alexander]

This is one of my favorite too, thanks a lot for your time to read and review, take care

[Bright Ocean Star]

Linda, I like the first stanza especially. I love this imagery of the wings in wind allowing you to take off and disappear...and dreams just waiting for you to enter their realm. Very beautiful and contemplative piece. Thank you, dear friend, for sharing it with us.

[Linda alexander]

Thanks a lot for the review, was in great denial to dream for unknown reasons, now I started dreaming, am so glad I started it helps a lot, after all it is tax free and cost effective, take care my friend

[audrie]

This reminds me of the beginning of love and making oneself vulnerable to one another. . . very uplifting piece

[Linda alexander]

Thank you so much for the review, so glad that you found this poem uplifting, I like this one too compared to my other poems

[Claire in VA]

I love reading your reviews of other poems on this site and decided to read some of your work.
I can already see that I am going to enjoy reading you.
Thank you for lifting us up with this poem.
Lovely and light!
Claire

[Linda alexander]

Thanks a lot and glad to hear it is inspirational too, take care

[Lydia Shutter]

A feeling of weightlessness....just before Morpheus whisks us away to dreamland. A great escape...a feeling of serenity....I liked it. lydi**

[Linda alexander]

Thanks a lot, really liked your review, hugs Lydi

[m.s.early]

I am getting lighter and lighter
Just waiting to be lifted up

Your poetry always brings an interesting twist to the English language. Sometimes I think it's visiting and mastering in a way that those indigenous to it are envious of. Your construction is always unique and you speak with an intriguing voice that draws me into your poetry.

I love the depth of such few verses.

[Linda alexander]

Thanks a lot for the precious review, your words made me so humble, this field of writing is naive to me mostly, really glad to be among the talented ones

[jacob erin-cilberto]

we would all love to disappear into dreams, sometimes....seems a safer place...being carried off by the wind of fantasy...

[Linda alexander]

Thanks a lot for the fabulous review, my biggest dream is a huge house, in New York it is the most impractical dream, so we will see

[jacob erin-cilberto]

when i lived in NY in the fifties, we lived in an apartment on sedgewick avenue...it was humongous...good luck with your dream...

[Linda alexander]

My house is smaller than a shoe box, still tax and the loan is humongous, not the building, take care my friend

[Sami Khalil]

Dreams do lift us up and brand our calling. The more rein we give the kite the higher it will go up and above. Bravo on a wonderful poem...:).........................

[Linda alexander]

Thanks a lot mississippe for the review, so true, if we have a strong dream it is fantastic, my dream is to have a huge house, see a singer before I die, singer is seventy five years already, see the whales which I did few times already, can swim in ocean for a day, current list is this only, take care

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Wonderful. You are welcome...:)......................

[Linda alexander]

Take care mississippe, really appreciate the time you take to read and review, I am honored to be among all of the talented ones

[Sami Khalil]

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