Relations

"As you live within rainbow

Does it make entire meaning to your whole life"

Yes if you you inspect thread by thread

Heart to heart sung melodies lingers

As forced to live out of the heaven on earth

At times feel like saying farewell from life itself

"Cradle for frostbite of emotions 

Relations, matters even in a materialistic world"

Author's Note

I wrote a review for one of the poem Salubrious Solicitation done by amazing poet Jacob and Jacob helped me to edit this one to make it better, thanks a lot Jacob

Reviews

[Stephen]

First off, yeah .. you`ve well adored that talented poet, Jacob using a precious word "Amazing" ..he even deserves far than OUR words indeed ... And Secondly, this poem`s very beautiful. In everyone`s life, the relations do work as the rainbow .. The rainbow`s got 7 colors in it so the life has ... even many colors are dispersed in the life by US ... doing millions of trillions of things including hate, love with or without faith. Very though-invoking piece. I love the strength of your stuffs, in the few words, you always speak up to the world much ... Great job!!

[Linda alexander]

Thanks a lot for your really apt review and kind words, this site especially few writers helped me a lot, take care

[Stephen]

My pleasure. Since i`d joined this site, I didn`t know the worth of it but yeah, with the time I learnt .. and to me ... even I think, to everyone who love literature, this site`s a BLESSING .. isn`t it? We write, post, share, help, learn, raise skills and grow up holding the fingers bunches of talents hovering around this site so, yeah ... some writers `re very good at writing and kind as well love helping others and which`s what the great matter of concern of raising skills .. isn`t it? Keep writing & posting your beautiful writes. I always love reading your stuffs ... even i`m pleased to meet you, Linda.

[Claire in VA]

You have profound words. I am impressed with your thoughts.
Claire

[Linda alexander]

Thanks a lot, take care my friend

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They sure do:))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))

[Linda alexander]

Thanks a lot for the review, my friend, yes relationships are ultimately the heroes, villains, coloring agents, spices, meaning, bonding, communications, the straw to hang on in this very short fragile life, so they do matter

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Yes they do:)))))))))))))))))))))

[Chris]

I came by to listen to YOUR thoughts...

Finding our "meaning" takes time and a willingness to look. You've a lot to say

[Linda alexander]

Well said, appreciate your visit and for the review, help me to improve my writing, tae care chris

[Chris]

You take care as well...

[Sami Khalil]

Relations are weaved thread by thread, are nurtured step by step, are sung note at a time to create a melody. Relations and communications are very important human pillars. An excellent write...:).................

[Linda alexander]

Thanks a lot mississippe, poet Jacob helped me to edit it, for the first time I believed today I can write, did not believe you all these times when you said I can write, thanks a lot, I grew faster as I was among you all talented ones in this site, take care

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome muchly...:).......................

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, Linda...and this reads much cleaner now...the lines are smart...still a bit of editing needed but this is a good poem.

jacob

[Linda alexander]

Thanks a lot for the review, really appreciate the time you took to help me edit, take care