Colors lost or stolen

Losing colors is similar to getting depressed, not able to enjoy anything, which one used to do in it's most prior losing colors

Was travelling with bag of colors

Not sure may be stolen purposefully

Even lost may be by random accident

Bag was empty and colors all gone

Not sure when exactly it happened

Hard to walk without these colors

Sky not blue anymore and sun flower not yellow

Sunlight irritating my eyes and ocean simply scares me

Want my colors back desperately

Know for sure it is not easy as I think

Do not even mind borrowing some of yours

So hard to walk without colors

Author's Note

Who will give me one color at least

Reviews

[Beau Maysey]

Here, I'll give you some green, if you'd like.
Nice poem, really like the idea here, and I'm sorry you get depressed, that's something I deal with too sometimes
Be careful that you do not place too many sentence fragments near each other, and also of punctuation
I like the concept of bagged colors, the colors representing emotions. Common theme amongst poetry, uniquely done here. Way to go!

[Linda alexander]

Thank you so much, I will take green for sure, green and purple are my favorite colors, thank you so much about the structure, when I can not concentrate everything falls apart, in case if I continue to write, I may take in to consideration when I can think clearly, will give few months to think clearly, that is the goal, we will see

[Linda alexander]

I did some fixing up, thank you, take care

[paul sal.....]

spring has arrived, there will soon be a rainbow of colors to behold, simply refill your bag with the sight

[Linda alexander]

Thank you so much. Well said will try to as you said. Take care

[Sapphire Naylor]

Thought provoking defiantly. Well written :)

[Linda alexander]

Thank you for the positive review take care

[m.s.early]

This is my favorite of yours thus. The title caught me immediately and the poem certainly did it justice.

The depth is incredibly awakening. I am smiling and thanking God for the blessing of color. Thank you Linda :)

100 shades of blue :)

[Linda alexander]

Thank you so much for the very positive review, had to spill it out as I was so mad entire day, and I can not compromise with myself, wrote two more poems afterwards and came in to harmony with myself, than you so much color and the shades too, take care

[Linda alexander]

Thank you so much for your support in my writing

[m.s.early]

Thank you too for supporting me, Linda.

[Frieda P]

Here's some crimson red to warm your heart, can't be walking around without that hue for sure....well said.

[Linda alexander]

I am getting richer and richer with colors, I will take it definitely, thank you for your generosity, take care

[Frieda P]

My pleasure and I'll throw in some amethyst just for good measure....

[Linda alexander]

Do not think I am too greedy, you offered, so there is no issues to take it, amethyst and green are my favorite colors too

[Frieda P]

Hey the more the merrier..........

[Sami Khalil]

Colors bring vibrancy and choices instead of just black and white. I love color(s) especially in the spring and early fall when the leaves change. Now emotions can be black or white or we can add color to them...A wonderful poem...:).........

[Linda alexander]

Thank you very much Sami, but I asked for a color to borrow, Scott already gave me orange immediately, which color you going to offer

[Sami Khalil]

Not sure. Tough one...You are welcome...:)...................

[Linda alexander]

It is fine Sami, got blue of the vast sky from Scott's poem, orange for cheering up from Scott, which is plenty for now

[Sami Khalil]

I will think on something...You are welcome...:)......................

[Scott Metro]

Living without colors is a dim reality...
I'll give you a red/orange...it's a bright, active color...cheer you up.
I hope you walk soon with color.
Well done Linda.
Scott

[Linda alexander]

Thank you so much for the positive review, and for the generosity of giving bright color too, more than that your poem made me realize that I did lost the colors, so took some beautiful blue color of the sky from your poem without informed consent, Shokran

[Scott Metro]

You can have my colors anytime....
Scott

[Linda alexander]

Perfectly OK with orange at present, something is way better than nothing, am not too greedy

[Scott Metro]

:)
Scott.....