Search for new strategy

This poem is about the perception of a spouse to escape or manage the mess of challenging family life

I have break this vicious circle

The circle the son of arjun abhimanyu was in

I do not want to perish in this circle

We can raise like eagles only in writing

I am standing puzzled half way of the journey

I know for sure I do not want to perish

I may need to break these strains of negative pulling

I may need some fresh air

I may also need some anti depressants

I now for sure I do not want to be buried in this melancholy

Rose has no more fragrance or beauty

Even intimacy is nor appealing

This is a real challenge for me

I need to stay away from this consuming fire

The days go by without any creativity or productivity

I do not want to hate my journey

I need to find a structure

I need to find a way

I need to to create a new creek that I can continue to flow

I keep on pushing harder and harder

I keep on searching and searching

I need a new strategy for my journey

I am trying many options

I am praying for at least one option to click

I am impatient, tired, and worried

I know for sure I won't succumb in to my own grave

I will keep my head above water

I may get that boat in time

Reviews

[Stephen]

Ist. Replace it.. "We can raise like eagles is only in writing" WITH "We can raise like eagles only in writing"

IInd. Replace it .. "Rose is no more fragrant or beautiful" WITH "Rose HAS no more fragrant or beauty" OR "Rose`s no more fragrant or beautiful."

So, these`re the only minor errors I find in this write so, thought to make you help out so, I did ;)

Very nice poem, I can find the compositions of some myths ... some taste of ancients lives by your words. What a beautiful write, Linda!! Your themes always make me surprised. I must say, this write`s one of my favorites. All verses are beautiful and thought-provoking. Great flow of ink!!

[Linda alexander]

Thanks a lot from my heart for this beautiful review, in Hindu religious book Mahabharath the poor candidate Abhimanyu was captivated in a special and complicated dangerous trap called Padmavyuha, which means warriors arranged in the shape of a lotus, and the opposite team knew he did not know how to break that trap, and he died, arjun his dad is my favorite character in the whole war, who continue to fight even at his son's death as he had to concentrate on his task, there is a famous advice Lord Krishna gives to arjun called which is very famous saying continue your journey, winning or losing should not affect you, continuing war is only expected out of you, I was so impressed by that strategy, Lord Krishna is Abhmanyu's maternal uncle.