The girl who loved thunderstorms

It is exciting atleast to someone to watch thunderstorms, but to be with thunderstorms it can change you, even to an extent you are not anymore yourself but a scared person or a survivor

She was the girl dancing when thunderstorm came

She was dancing with both arms up in the storm

The storm was not strong and she was only fourteen

The fourteen year grew up in to twenties

She wedded a real thunderstorm

The thunderstorm crushed her, 

The storm scared her to death

She formed a family with the storm

She protected her children as the storm was too strong

She survived and her family

She is rewinding again and again

She is questioning her decision to marry storm

She stopped, and looked back

She could not realize how immature she was

Here comes the villain , the next generation storms

Yes, the storms with intricacies of the polluted world

She sighed, still I am the girl loved my thunderstorm

Yes, the change is the ownership of thunderstorms

Author's Note

this article is just to promote everybody to write as well as read what others write constructively to some extent, ignore structure

Reviews

[Natalie Dieudonne]

Well this will definitely promote others to write and read. As I read it I'm thinking of ways to broaden my mind and writing.

I really loved the way you wrote this. Good job :)

[Linda alexander]

Thank you very much for the most positive review, this is the first attempt in my writing field, I love my thunderstorm more than anything else, I believe, poem reciprocity is our twenty year relationship, that is my favorite poem so far, average poem, take care

[Natalie Dieudonne]

You're welcome my friend. For your first attempt that is pretty good. Your passion is inspiring :)

[Linda alexander]

Take care, glad to have you as friend

[Natalie Dieudonne]

Me too :)

And keep writing my dear

[poulina]

a beautiful piece of literature by a beautiful individual
much love to the writer

[Linda alexander]

Thank you for the review, are you proud about the girl or not, or she is a fool what do you think