Spendthrift

When I think about the times I've spent wishing'

I recognize some moments went missin'

But why should I care

When I know you weren't there

Those were the days I was fishin'

Alone but not lonely

Casting my line

Setting my hook

Spending my time

And just wishin'

The moments fell out of my wallet

Reviews

[Sel Whiteley]

Beautifully drawn

[...]

. "alone but not lonely" ...
. profoundly poetic ...

[Gandré]

this is sweet, the moments fell out of my wallet - you never disappoint, always I find some line I love.

[*** Hey Jude***]

Another creative write. It is nice to be here again, and read this prose my friend! Blessed Be ~ Jude :-)

[Ed Hart]

oh yes, all those moments...nothing left but slow change

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Simple and all together replenishing for the mind. Very easy to read and clear, well done, good read.