Tilly

I have a friend

Now trapped in memories

Who loved a song

I sang today

Since then I've added

More words

Re-seeing him 

Helped me hit the notes

Reviews

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sometimes the most simple words can be not only the most effect but also the most touching..something hits home with the tone and structure that could not and should not be anything more than it is..perfect.

[xx]

The structure of this poem added appropriate rhythm. The whimsical feel of the words belied the tragedy underneath and added a sort of reverberation that I can still feel even now.

Wonderful job, and although I'm not much of a poet, I appreciated this piece.

[Emily B]

sometimes i just follow the favorites of all my favorites

i find the best poems that way

[emmajoy]

Such a cleverly created poem .. a mile of meaning in an inch of words, touching, beautiful.

[An Ordinary Woman]

poems like this is why I keep coming here, Donald. you always hit the right notes....