Wet Cheeks

The steepness of a hill on memory lane

As sun shines through whispered clouds

as tireder shoulders welcome rain

wet fingers grasp at shrouds

It's always easy going down

And okay to be alone

But only for a while

Reviews

[John Jackson (El Juero)]

Boy howdy, i DO know this!
Excellent.

[Valentine]

We all hit lows...thankfully with God on our side..we come up again..Nice write..Valentine

[Emily B]

oh, sometimes you have to visit, just don't stay too long

these words are beautiful, perfect

[Narnie]

Do I grab it and whack it in? haha...:) This is lovely Donald! I'm here a-gathering again.

[Sel Whiteley]

Powerful. Yes, reflection is great but you need to avoid becoming too obsessed. You've conveyed that so well in juxtaposing "whispered clouds" and "shrouds", one showing the lightness and beauty of the message conveyed, the other indicating death. The themes are well-unified by the lines.

It's always easy going down

And okay to be alone

But only for a while

[Morrigan Nicole]

Wow! I can totally relate to this, keep up the good work!