Published

Two feet high and rising

Dancing a tango two feet off the sod

Thanks to a poet from Brighton

So many people now give me a nod

With lots of them reading my  writin'

I'm higher than ever and rising each day

Not thinking It may be a deal

I just keep on writing in hope of success

Trying to make it all real

to capture a reader 

And with my words lead her

While the rest of the time I confess

I wait for the second shoe fall

But lately I'm having a ball

Reviews

[Sel Whiteley]

Good to know your happy, you deserve to be. And the happiness is really captured in the poem's rhythm.

[Narnie]

Haha Donald. It's been lovely reading your poetry here again. And this was a nice surprise :)

[Tony]

Me too!
Great Poem, Donald.

[emmajoy]

What fun .. this could be sung to an accoustic guitar a la entertainer sophisti-cat!

'Dancing a tango two feet off the sod
Thanks to a poet from Brighton
So many people now give me a nod
With lots of them reading my writin'

That's near memorable after one read!

[Gandré]

congratulation on this one.
you deserve being read and success
for you are authentic.

[Ladysue]

I love this...it is so a joy to read and yes you should be having a ball...a very happy write... great work...

[Phibby Venable]

As well you should! lol...always a delight to read your work!
very entertaining & excellent to the eye.

[Helen Woodward]

Hi Donald :-) It has been too long since I have read your work, but I never forgot how delightfully quirky your poems are and it seems by this piece that many have discovered your talent!! Great to hear my friend...
Take care...

Helen~

[Tomás Ó C..]

Nice ditty!!!

[TTBoy28]

I can feel your joy in this piece. However, do you have a typo in the second to last line..."...second shoe to fall...?" Very nice!