dreamboat

Floating on a sea of dreams
In a craft of woven wishes
Holding fast to helm of hope
Trimming sail with fishes
The waves advance
We waltz and dance
With gunnels near awash
A sudden shout
We come about
Clinging to the sheets

Reviews

[Gandré]

this is pure innocence and the ultimate dream. I love your imagination!

[Sel Whiteley]

This a beautiful poem about the sea of dreams, you really do have a way of making us look expression afresh. You have a masterful use of sound, both rhyme and alliteration. I liked:

In a craft of woven wishes
holding fast to helm of hope
trimming sail with fishes