Are we there yet?

an oldie dredged up

To wondrous ways of tell
In words of double meaning
The tilt of sliding hell
That sets my heart to keening
Finding words to fit the pace
a walking trot or flat out race
To put the reader in a place
That's strange and yet familiar
then turn a phrase to lead him on
In ever growing eager
Tis then I'll know that I've gone on
To be a major leaguer

Reviews

[Phibby Venable]

wonderful beat! fine work.

[Gandré]

The worlds of double meaning... and how we like to use them, always... It is always about "who is looking, and what for?", isn't it?
I like your interchanging thoughts, poet's sentiments and man's feelings.

[Legion]

Batter up!

:)

I like this. An interesting way to tell the tale.