Hawking

clouds race to hide the moon
closing the sky and fogging below
Flashes and rumbles distort distance
as ever she flees into self
shivered frustration clings to ire
as dissonance dances diversion
Darkness consumes and contracts
Deterred and determined in flight
Soul searching into the night
A spectator caught between acts

Reviews

[Narnie]

Perfect - the rhythm, the vocabulary and the sentiment. Perfect.

[Gandré]

so beautifully lyrical, Donal. I loved how the tongue was feeling while I was reading loud your poem. you are really a master for those super short pr�gnant - we say - poems (doesn t mean pregant, of course, you know it. u speak German).
thank you also for taking time and reading my MUSIC poem. Glad that this deaf girl played music for you. smile.

[Legion]

And the search goes on. Beautifully written. Lots of imagery.

[Treasaigh (The Solitar..]

Magnificent imagery. Great concept and flow. Beautiful write!=)