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A Poem by Donald Meikle
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He hovered still

Beak almost touching my glasses

Then chirped

and shot away

Joy of life swept through me

Ruby shimmered

as he made my day

© 2014 Donald Meikle


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Isn't funny how some seemingly simple thing in life can elicit such deep emotion...
Vivid, moving, and well written.

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is so sweet and deep at the same time, nature can bring us the best of pleasures..

Posted 10 Years Ago


Simply lovely.............you always paint the most amazing pictures

Posted 10 Years Ago


Very good little piece. You were able to put so much detail.
My favorite:
Then chirped
and shot away
Joy of life swept through me...

Posted 10 Years Ago


Nothing like nature to life a spirit higher!

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on June 7, 2014
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Donald Meikle
Donald Meikle

Halifax, MA



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Liverpool born,USNavy vet. Enjoying first marriage. three daughters, (two bathrooms) one until they left. (a tree that loves me) Poet thru geneology) Scot Irish. Living in New England more..

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