A Summer's Day

Today melts by

Thoughts and actions blend into mist

lime lemon ice and melon

inhaled from cool glass

swallowed clumps of pleasure

Three fans one rotating

stroke sun itch skin

Soon  pool will lure to deeper cold

But now the cool glass owns

half downed

 as

Today melts by

in memories of Summer rain

Reviews

[New Dawn]

This is beautiful, I could actually feel the coolness of the glass and hear the clink of the ice - cubes. Made me feel warm on a cold dark rainy evening here in England. Thank you

[Donald Meikle]

That's where I started and odds are it was raining then! Glad t'be of service ma'am