slipping neap

I wanted words to flow

All my thoughts just glide and go

Like flotsam clumps in tidal flow

And as I wait upon the tide

With sweet companion at my side

I hold my precious thoughts inside

If told I know I'd have to hide

These waves of wonder crash asunder

Upon the spell that I am under

And spin my thoughts around my head

To make me think that I have read

These words to fill me full of dread

And so I write them down instead

Before the ebb of tide I slide and slither

Yon and hither

Wondering whither I have been

Reviews

[Ed Hart]

i see you've still got a teenager rattling around inside of you

[Dr. Wood ?]

It's a good idea to run with the flow of rhythm and rhyme..but this sort of falls away at the end a little I feel