S*** Like This

The chorus of a song I'm trying to write -

"Do you always mismatch your socks?

Does hair always look that way?

Is that how you usually talk?"

I say to them,

Go away, go away

But their words only fill my mind

My emotions are no longer mine

They ask me if I’m always this strange

But I-

I do s**t like this all the time.

Author's Note

The chorus of a song I'm trying to write, but the chords aren't popping up in my head like they usually do, haha. This one will probably take a while.

Reviews

[The Iron Horseman]

This is looking good so far!
One small suggestion. I would change your line 'Go away, go away' to Go, go away'. Then you've got a nice constantly declining beat on those first five lines.
Looking forward to seeing the finished song!

[Arriam]

This is really nice and it's got such a simple truth to it. I can tell this will be excellent!

-Arriam

[Ghost writer]

I actually really love this cause it's just like me, people always seem to think I'm so weird just acting for attention or something, very good