Day

First Poem...

Writing and speaking,

Still waiting to make a change to the words said all day.

 

Picking up a pie from the baker's,

Asking why is it so busy this time of day.

 

Sitting on the fields,

Wondering why they looked the same as the last day.

 

Climbing through trees without leaves,

Pondering the meaning of the passed days.

 

Running home through traffic,

Thinking I'll be late for the next day.

 

Reviews

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

I like it.
Good Job

[Hot-N-Cold_17]

It confused me just a little bit. It seemed kind of random but I still like it good work!

[Becca :)]

i like pie too

and if theres no leaves would it be winter?

and if u run thru traffic will u get hit by a car and die?

other than that.......its beautiful!!!

[TIFFANY!]

woowwzaa this was sooo amazing and im only sayin that cuz every1 else said that..but in reality i really did not understand a word u said. can u simplify it please?

hhaa jkjkjkjkjkkjk i really understood it but my stories are better and u know it.

[John A Common]

Great job, a wonderfull poem.

[Wildecat]

This is a wonderful poem, thanks for sharing.