So Long

So Long

A Poem by Eden

It has been a very long day
I have longed for you
Tried to do different things
still I think of you
worried of what you are doing now

Missing your sweet messages
hugging me tightly
kissing me softly
Telling me how you have miss me
How much you love me
How much you want to be with me

I miss you so much
I felt the day was just too long without you by my side
It feels so cold
so empty
wondering if you think of me too

I want this day to end well
hoping for your safety
while you open your door
I will be waiting for you with open arms
saying "what took you so long"
and hug you so tight as ever to let you feel
that I love you
miss you
so much

© 2014 Eden


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Beautiful write... I loved the flow and arrangement of the words...
I can relate to missing someone, I could feel your longing while reading each word.
Keep writing and thanks for sharing this wonderful poem with us!

Posted 16 Years Ago


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Eden
Eden

Manila, Philippines



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