Word Play [For my Looouise]

so i've been really uninspired but i wanna write :D so ima do a little word play for my Looouise cause i know how much she loves my writing. so this is just for you beau :D

the ceiling fan loiters 
the television screen follows me around. 
its eyes like a crow
tick tick tick

bomb set countdown started
the pornography website in view
one click, one look
tick tick tick

addiction sets in
unrelated unplanned says the therapist
confused confessed convicted
tick tick tick

f**k f**k f**k
convulsing running in circles
strobe lights, loud noises
touch me touch me
love love love
we're all in love

rave rave rave
tick tick tick

shots in the air

....dead

Author's Note

its not suppose to make any sense
so don't worry

Reviews

[Looouise]

It didn't make much sense, but it made all the sense in the world.
:]
I especially loved these lines:

addiction sets in
unrelated unplanned says the therapist
confused confessed convicted

:]
And you're an amzing writer.
And your words astound me as ever.