an after thought

an after thought

A Poem by amelia.elaine
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i currently don't have a printer due to the fact that we're remodeling. so the main computer isn't hooked up, but the wifi still is. because me and my madre use our laptops. and only hers works with the printer. so this is a poem thing for my sister. that

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 theirs a story boiling in your finger tips
dying to get out

the truth behind those brown eyes
no s**t, no lies, just truth

theirs a song bubbling in your lungs
dying to be sung

the emotion you feel
the pain you've been dealt in the poker game called life

theirs a dance raging in the tips of your toes
just dying to be released

scream and dance
don't care what anyone thinks

 

your body is dying
yelling for you to release
the beauty your mind is creating
the beauty you've been craving
emotion comes soon, quick and too often
we both know this too well
love is cheap
heartbreak is prostitution 
and that pencil is your cheap w***e

pick it up
use it like its meant to be used
and bless the world with your words. 

© 2009 amelia.elaine


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Wonderful imagery ...
theirs a story boiling in your fingertips ...
theirs a dance raging in the tips of your toes

Emotion comes soon, quick and too often --KILLER line!

And what a powerful ending:
love is cheap
heartbreak is prostitution
and that pencil is your cheap w***e
pick it up
use it like its meant to be used
and bless the world with your words.
Kudos!!!


Posted 15 Years Ago



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amelia.elaine
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