my baby jupiter

my dead friend. 10-line poem..

 

tiny drops of jupiter

embedded in sequences of pearl

and soft pink A-symmetrical twisting

brimming with motion, wriggling between walls

blanketed in glassy, winding scales like mirrors

a coiling, limbless skeleton drifts among words said

she unfurls in the half shell as Venus, beginning

but returns as baby Jupiter, who leaks from every pore

she remains, emanating from the fingertips

tiny drops of jupiter, as it rains

Reviews

[Sexy Jones]

The way you put together words to form a line is amazing.

Great write.

[shadadakiya]

sweet ,very diffrent, i like it though good write

[Hedra Helix]

magical flow;) a nice intro to your writing. I anticipate what you have to share next.