The feeling

When your beloved ones makes you feel good..in fact perfectly out of the world. I wrote this remembering that feeling

The feeling

I don’t know what it feels like kissing the third corner of your heartbeats

It feels like somewhere I forgot to blink the third segments of my eyelashes

And stare at you completely, endlessly

Yes the first time when I kissed you

I felt pulled slowly and then forcefully

Rhythmically

To your aura

And as you set your soft eyes on me

My whole fingertips tries to caress your retina

Underneath which it feels like the tops of vanilla "freshly bought

The current of heat burns my fingertips along the traces of your eyes

And yes in that perfect moment I have felt and known

I will always want to be felt like this forever.

 

 

 

Reviews

[Deepak Belbase]

the words are totally raw, as you used freely with a given emotion. so it's so simple & very beautiful poem.

[Pritika Khatri]

no..but somewhere in my heart i always get this feeling when I saw him..so kind of made this in poem..

[zainul]

Lovely expression.
Is it your personal experience?